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Fading Moon, Bottled Star

I hear soud, echo in the emptiness.

I can has opinions please?
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Hey guys,

I've been talking to people on the NaNoWriMo site and the overwhelming opinion seems to be that books in present tense appeal less to the reader. I can see how it would be awkward in some situations writing - as with action and stuff like that, but my book isn't going to be big on the action front at all. And when I write in present tense and read over it it doesn't sound awkward to me, but maybe that's just because it's my writing. So I thought I'd post a snippet here and see what you think. Would you read an entire book written in the present tense? Is it worth it to change now that I'm almost halfway through?

Here and here are your sections. )
Thoughts, anyone?
I really don't want to change it. To me it sounds fine, but again that could just be because I'm the author...
Thanks :)
-Shawna

P.S. I'M GONNA BE IN CASH'S BOOK, GUYS! WHOOOOOOOT!!! :D

Of Familiar Faces. I need help.
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[info]longerthanwedo

Hey there.
So I think most of you know that I'm doing National Novel Writing Month. Well, even though I'm extremely behind, I've been messing around in Photoshop and making covers. I can't decide which cover to use, however, which is where I need your help. I have like seven that I didn't spend much time on, but if you pick your favorite I might work on it more and make it better :)

Of Familiar Faces )

Mememememeyou.
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[info]longerthanwedo
Stolen from [info]xbrittxwentzx

1. Use the letters of your first name.
2. Find titles to your favorite songs that correspond to each letter and include them with that letter.
3. Tag 3 friends. (Except I don't tag anyone. Anyone who wants to do this be my guest. :D)


Sand in Your Shoes - This Providence
Harry Frazzee and No, No, Nannette - Forgive Durden
Annie Use Your Telescope - Jack's Mannequin
Waves that Never Break - The Like
North Pole Song - Ben and Carlton
Angie - Cobra Starship

Pshawwww. I have some writer's block. Anyone care to help me out with that? :) <3

Of Familiar Faces
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[info]longerthanwedo


NaNoWriMo 2009

That's a working title. What do you think? I already used it as the title of a fic, but I don't think that matters.
This month is going to be crazy. Care to join me in the madness? It'll be lots of fun and we can stress and plan and plot together.
Come to the dark side, you know you want to ;)

8k and counting...

My life in technicolor
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[info]longerthanwedo
Heyhey. I decided to post a couple of recent digital paintings :)


Victoria. I found this and just HAD to paint it. Two more: 
Here and here. )I'm working on an actual acrylic of Brendon, and a drawing of Alex Greenfartwald. So those later. Also, I'm participating in National Novel Writing Month, so that's my focus right now and you probably won't get any fic out of me  till it's done, lol. I'm way behind. 6k and I should have 13k by tonight...um...

Haha that's all for now.



Masterpiece (Aren't You Proud You're the One That Made Me?)
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Title: Masterpiece (Aren’t You Proud You’re the One that Made Me?)

Author: longerthanwedo

 Beta: melody_so_sweet

Pairing: Semi-Rydon

Rating: PG

POV: 3rd: The artist is Ryan.

Summary: It had always been there. At first it was just an image; a passing flickering glimmer of a person in the artist’s shifting mind. This image, it came from the artist’s unconscious. It was the image of a man’s face; an unstable reflection, a visual replication of the artist’s mixed up feelings.

Disclaimer: I don’t own the people, and the title/inspiration comes from Meg & Dia’s “Masterpiece”.

Author’s Note: This is a kind of weird little thing I wrote. It’s not your typical fic by any means, but I hope you like it! Comments are so much love :)

 

 

Done by the hands of a broken artist... )

Something to read, someone to help?
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[info]longerthanwedo

Hallo meine Freunde :D

Have a random update of sorts.

Went to the drama club's play last night. It was great. There were zombies and Shakespeare and all my friends died. And now I get extra credit in two classes. Whoot.

In music news:

1. Can anyone rip me things off MySpace/teach me how to rip things off MySpace? I really, really want Greta's new song and Meg & Dia's little acoustic one.

2. Cartel. I love them so, so much. And the new album, Cycles is amazing, and you should all listen to it like now. Plus they're adorable and they followed me on Twitter and said they loved me :D

3. I like The Like. I'd never checked them out before I heard the one song on the radio show that Ryan and Alex were on, but I really liked that song, so I got the album and I'm loving it more and more each time I listen to it. Also I think I look a little bit like Tennessee...when my hair's straight and my bangs aren't over to the side. I even made an attempt at replicating one picture to show you. My rushed photoshopping to make it look like the same texture and stuff kind of failed, but whatever.
See: Here )4. The Young Veins. I'm really, really excited for their album. And I love the new song. Although it's not like Ryan to be that obvious...and we all know Keltie noticed. Have you all read her blog about it? Is it really strange that it made me want to hug Ryan as well as Keltie? IDK.

Oooh, another thing that I never mentioned on here but totally could because Jade's my only real life LJ friend! Pete Wentz's twin goes to my school. Not literally, but he really could be Pete's (younger, Alaskan) twin. They have like the exact same smile, similar eyes and nose, black hair, similar fashion sense. But it's more than that. My friend and Pete have even more freakish coincindence-like similarities. List:

Here )
He gets irritated when we mention the fact that he's clearly Pete's twin. He says he gets that a lot. Understandably. XD

One more thing. Oh, wait, no. Two more.

One question: Is it really strange to have a novel written in present tense?

Last: I think I'll put one of my little song poems on here. I feel like it. This one was while listening to Amanda Palmer's "Ampersand". I like it.
And...here. )

Your Silhouette (Dance on the Coast)
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Title: Your Silhouette (Dance on the Coast)

Author:[info]longerthanwedo

Beta:[info]melody_so_sweet

Pairing: Rydon

Rating: PG-13

POV: 1st – Brendon’s

Summary: Your silhouette smiled. “I’m thinking how everything’s easier in the dark.”
Disclaimer: I don’t own the people, and the title/inspiration This Providence’s “Sand in Your Shoes”.
Author’s Note: A short, semi-sad standalone written for the[info]rydenrevival community.

 

 

Falling in love is easy to do. )

I love you anyway...
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Hello. I feel like  a random post tonight.
Just been partying with Amanda Palmer on Twitter - LOFNOTC=Losers of Friday Night on the Computer. Everyone join! It's where all the cool kids are!

Music, right now. Oh my god. There's so much stuff going on to look forward to. A new Meg and Dia song just was posted on myspace, The Young Veins had their interview and new song, and both those are absolutely AMAZING! By the end of the week Greta is supposed to release a song off her new record, Cartel (who followed me and direct messaged me on twitter, omg) has a new record coming out on the 20th, there's new The Rocket Summer on the 27th, and new We The Kings on December 8th. And whenever Ryan and Jon manage to find a label, new TYV, which I am so stoked for you have no idea. Sorry, I felt the need to list all that, just to make sure I wasn't forgetting anything. Also, if you want links to any of the stuff I mentioned, feel free to ask me in the comments, but I was too lazy to go get them all right now since I don't know how many of you will read this XD

As for writing, I haven't done much lately. I have a couple standalones with [info]melody_so_sweet, and they'll be posted whenever she gets the chance to beta; I know she's busy. And so am I. Kind of. Mostly just don't have any ideas. I was writing something along the lines of a 10-song meme, but in poem form. That may seem weird, to write a poem about a song, but it works, I don't know how. I'll post those sometime soon, probably not on the comm so they wont' be beta'd...but I don't think a poem requires much of a beta anyway.
 

Anyway, I've been feeling quite accomplished lately (posting on the[info]selfportraitscommunity like every day because self portraits are so much fun. And I organized my deviantART today, put everything into folders and I felt very spiffy for that XD) And I felt like rambling on and on about it to whoever reads this. :) 
 

I love you all,
Shawna ♥


200 ICONS
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[info]longerthanwedo

200 Icons! Whoot!

28 Paramore
08 Forgive Durden
20 Cobra Starship
22 The Hush Sound
28 The Cab
21 Nikki Reed
22 Kristen Stewart
23 Ashley Greene
28 Amanda Palmer

       

Comment, credit, don't change, don't hotlink, etc. :)

 

All back here. )

DRAWING POST \o/
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[info]longerthanwedo

Cut for all my recent drawings :) )
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Stand next to you, for a while
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[info]longerthanwedo

I miss Live in Chicago.

I miss it a lot.

But I know what'll happen if I do.

Someone come watch it with me.

Please?
 


Brendon: Drawing/Videos!
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[info]longerthanwedo

Hey everyone!

I drew Brendon a couple days ago and some people on deviantART wanted me to video the process for them to see. And I figured I'd post those here, too, just for fun. And for anyone who reads my journals. :)

The lips were there to start with, sorry I didn't get that.

Part 1:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRNERy-sdVw

...and the entire drawing of the right eye was at school so I couldn't video that either :(.

Part 2:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tjqxClsvoQg

Part 3:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EbX__NhfcOc

Part 4:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UBkWQzHvPbA

...and the rest of it was done at school. Next video I promise I'll do better, lol. This was my first try. Hope you guys like it :)

Finished product:


In Love to Music (Soldier) Part Two
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Part one.

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Part two. )

In Love to Music (Soldier) Part One
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Title: In Love to Music (Soldier)

Author: longerthanwedo

Beta: melody_so_sweet <3

Pairing: Ryan/Brendon, Brendon/OFC

Rating: PG-13

Summary:He was a soldier, he always was. He left his city to fight for America. We fell in love to music – we were just kids. We didn’t have time to be sorry for what we did.” Brendon’s always belonged to Ryan, just not in the way that Ryan thought it mattered. Maybe the only thing that can change in their lives, in their relationship, is Ryan’s mind.

Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters (Jade may not be a bandboy, but she is a real person) and any and all lyrics belong to Anna Nalick’s “Soldier”. That includes the title. The banner is drawn by me.

Author’s Note: This is the longest standalone I’ve ever written. I’ve been working on it for months and I must say I’m quite proud of it. 15k and it’s not nearly as long as others out there, but it’s an accomplishment for me. So I hope you read it and I hope you like it and comments are the best thing for a writer. <3

 

 

 
 

 

If this life doesn't give you the love you expect, there's always the next. )

Will They Say Your Name?
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Title: Will They Say Your Name?

Author: longerthanwedo

Beta: melody_so_sweet

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: None, really, but the characters in my head are Ryan Ross and Greta Salpeter.

Summary: His memory fades as he remembers fading away. He remembers a voice, resounding as he dissolved. “When you’re gone, will they say your name?” The voice echoes in the emptiness. And then he’s there, here, sitting, watching from afar and unable to hear a thing.

Warning: Established character death, sadness with a kind of depressingly happy twist.

Disclaimer: Lyrics belong to The Hush Sound. Title belongs to The Hush Sound. My soul belongs to The Hush Sound, etc.

Author’s Note: I wrote this in a couple hours in the middle of the night. It’s based off The Hush Sound’s song, “That’s Okay”. This is the second time I’ve written fic to that song. I made a banner because I felt like it, even though this isn’t long in the slightest. Enjoy, and comments are the best!

 

 

I'm a ghost over ground on parade. )

Icons: Ashley Greene
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[info]longerthanwedo

So I was looking at New Moon moviestuff and it got me kind of stoked because I realized that it's really not that far away. And I felt like making icons. So I went through the only folder that was Twilight-related on my laptop:

100 Ashley Greene

       

Credit, comment, all that stuff :)
 

 

The Rest. )

Icons: The Cab, Andrew McMahon, The Hush Sound, Cobra Starship, William Beckett
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[info]longerthanwedo
Hello people. I've been too busy to post these lately, but I made about a billion icons.

There are:

10 The Cab
25 Andrew McMahon
19 The Hush Sound
31 Cobra Starship
59 William Beckett

Comment, credit, all that stuff :)

       


More behind this thing. )

I'm A Scar Away From Falling Apart (epilogue)
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Title: I’m A Scar Away From Falling Apart (epilogue)

Author: longerthanwedo

Beta: melody_so_sweet <33333

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Rydon

POV: 1st,Ryan’s

Summary: 
 Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters, but the beginning of this plot is based off of a true story. Title belongs to Fall Out Boy.
Author’s Notes: This is it! Longer note at the end <3 

Prologue I Chapter 1 I Chapter 2 I Chapter 3 I Chapter 4 I Chapter 5 I Chapter 6 I Chapter 7 I Chapter 8 I Chapter 9 I Chapter 10 I Chapter 11 I Chapter 12 I Chapter 13 I Chapter 14 I Chapter 15 I Chapter 16 I Chapter 17 I Chapter 18 I Chapter 19 I Chapter20

 

 

 

The epilogue. )

I'm A Scar Away From Falling Apart (21)
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Title: I’m A Scar Away From Falling Apart (21)

Author: longerthanwedo

Beta: melody_so_sweet <3

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Rydon

POV: 1st, Brendon’s

Summary:  As soon as he’s stopped grinning enough for him to speak he asks, “You think you could drive me to the rink?”
 Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters, but the beginning of this plot is based off of a true story. Title belongs to Fall Out Boy.
Author’s Notes: Technically, this is the last chapter of this story. But there will be an epilogue – expect that soon. Thank you to everyone who read, and even more to everyone who commented! I love you all! Also, Ryan in this chapter…is me, kind of. My feelings. <3

 

Prologue I Chapter 1 I Chapter 2 I Chapter 3 I Chapter 4 I Chapter 5 I Chapter 6 I Chapter 7 I Chapter 8 I Chapter 9 I Chapter 10 I Chapter 11 I Chapter 12 I Chapter 13 I Chapter 14 I Chapter 15 I Chapter 16 I Chapter 17 I Chapter 18 I Chapter 19 I Chapter20

 

Chapter 21 )

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